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ChasingZai
Chasing Zai
United States, MA, Boston

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Cognitive Dissonance

I have reasons to hold on to foolish hopes of getting back, despite having seen the relationship take in its last gasps of air. Inspite of knowing how much harder it is to revive a dead concept, than seeing the imminent demise and stanching the flow of blood.
I am blinded by the good times...the few intimate times, ignoring the rancid smell of infatuation gone sour. You cannot approach love with forensics demanding reasons and rationales. The autopsy is done when it is dead...lifeless. Love is too delicate to be prodded rudely with the sharp edge of logic.
Satisfaction is but an implicit understanding of our own limitations; the ceiling on our demands when the attainable is anchored and the desirable limitless.

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ChasingZai Comment by: ChasingZai - 2006-03-18 18:55
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Leah,

Thank you for the wonderful words of encouragement. I cannot express how timely they were and how much they helped erase most of the misery that's gathered up recently.
Comment by: - 2006-03-18 16:52
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I agree that this piece does come across as prose to a certain extent. Whether you call it prose or a story...either way it is art. You have expressed the intangible elements of love that demand our respect. Not only must we honor it even after death, but we must allow its current to sweep us away weightlessly into its sea even if we are to drown. We have to let go of our anchor and ride the waves...only then can we appreciate its energy to the fullest.You did well with this work. I look forward to reading more. - Leah
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-03-12 08:16
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Some of the lines seem forced, but it is very well written. You are very effective at expressing your points.
Tillyboa Comment by: Tillyboa - 2006-03-07 08:57
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Well written, I felt like it was going to turn into poetry any minute, you use words so well here: 'Love is too delicate to be prodded rudely with the sharp edge of logic.'
I felt an affinity with this, reminded me of when you reminise (sp!?) forgetting how truly awful the relationship was!
Blue Athena Comment by: Blue Athena - 2006-02-23 23:28
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The instance I read Cognitive, it took me to Instructional Design Cognitive theories. :)

It flows smooth and without reflecting signs of labour, if any. :)
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