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Still thinking
deborshi brahmachari
India, Delhi

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Nonsensical

I don’t make sense anymore.
Drifted by dusty vapor of a thousand nonsensical murmurs
I float bizarre
Amidst a crazy stream of grin

Tens and thousands of lifeless
Smirk around me, surround me

Those infinite insomniac roads that I have walked
And keep walking still
Carry, without a slightest trace of whine -
Torn pages of absurd vocabulary, once spoken

A sack full of dead poems
Mostly, half done
Words that never cared to rhyme
My songs, unsung

Sun, however still shines
time dries,cries
seasons die,fly.

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Still thinking Comment by: Still thinking - 2008-03-14 06:11
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thanks for your valuable comments
manoj Comment by: manoj - 2008-03-13 05:21
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Deep, thought provoking and dark.... nice poem
ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-03-10 21:22
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Hi Deborshi, We all have unfinished poems. Doesn't mean they won't be finished sometime. Don't give up on the small beginnings. Put them aside and take them out a few months later and see what comes of it then. They may not be as dead as you think. Poems don't have to rhyme. I prefer them to, but not necessary. I write very few in free verse. J
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