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shuchikalra
Shuchi Kalra
India

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My Dream Home

A little abode, midway up the hill
Surrounded by sparkling waters of a graceful little stream
Lush surroundings, exuding tweets and titters
And many a neighbor, all of my likeness
A little balcony, with a little bench for two
A little table with a basket full of fruits,
Little red flowers hanging out of cane baskets
A warm and woody outlook,
And a warm and cozy interior
Walls dressed in wall paper studded with wild roses
A fireplace to warm up the spirits
A little cottage surrounded by a greenbelt
And cats and dogs
And ducks and hens
All beings are welcome
Except those that are human
Which are a selected few?
Cold refreshing winds of the mountains
Innocent neighbors and love all around
Just you and me inside
In the house of my dreams.

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bcarlson Comment by: bcarlson - 2008-03-01 02:57
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I really like "exuding tweets and twitters." And I respect any freelance writer who attempts poetry.
poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-02-28 07:49
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This has been very well written but the problem, I guess is that you start off talking about something else and end talking about something else. There are alot of surprises in these prose. It has been very well written though
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