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In the Frame (Karen's Wee Challenge #27)
“Oh, God. Yes, yes, YES!” Savannah’s tattooed ankles quaked on Deke’s shoulders. Crimson stiletto heels spiked the air behind his brawny back.
“Aaaaahhhh…” They reached the sticky conclusion exactly as scripted.
“CUT. Take a break, people.”
Deke squeegee’d his hand across his sweaty face. A production assistant passed Savannah a towel for hers.
“Savannah, would you like to… um... get together sometime?”
She smiled. “Deke, let’s just keep it platonic, OK?”
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Very good read.. for the shortness. The tattooed ankles did it for me.. I'm quiet inked myself.
~Tori |
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| Thanks, Rosie. Just having a good time with this one. Similar theme to my Finishing Touch story - things aren't always what they seem to be. |
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| Hahaha! Made me laugh out loud! Just loved the last line after what had gone before. Cheers, Bill! |
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| Ha, very entertaining, Bill. I think I need to get out more. Loved the shoes... |
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The innocence of these ER regulars - it just warms my heart. Just like spending time in an Amish community. Is it time for Vespers yet?
If I'd had more words, I'd have put in a couple lines about the person who keeps all the pillows and cushions on the set nice and soft, called the "fluffer". A great occupation for a woman who starts lots of jobs but never seems to finish any of them.
Thanks, Karen. I missed the last go-round but went out of my way to get into this one. And also to class it up a bit with porn and TV wrestling. |
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