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Bewitched
with a nose twitch.
Fell in love with such a
lovely witch: getting hitched was pure
magic.
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i *loved* seeing that title come up in the thread.. lol. i beamed right over.
it really is nice. nice cadence.
the first 'with' could really be many many stronger words.
the same goes for 'such'.. which isnt for me. its weak.
i know...............im hardcore.
really a fun read.
thanks,
T
