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--Small editing suggestion (unless you meant the line as written). This shit is vicious. Well done! I like people who aren't afriad to write from the gut.
this is very aggressive..but i am sure you already know this...i feel that this about you...if it's not, i apologize...it ties in with your other 'my mistake'...it's almost as if the poetry is the therapy for the one that was hurt..maybe they don't really want to hurt the person...but the anger is still there wanting to be released..
