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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Honestly

You come to me
quietly,
sadly
contritely ...
... to tell me
"Honestly"
that the words
we've shared nightly
have all been in vain~
You've met someone else
You want to make a new start
Give all of your heart
to someone nearer
and dearer
to you~

You say
“I'm only being honest,
isn't that what you wanted?
To tell you the truth at all times?”

God no!
Lie to me,
give me hope,
make me believe
that this is all a game
to cause me pain
my punishment as it were
for being gone~

We've had so many yesterdays,
Now you're stealing our
tomorrows
how do you expect me
to pretend
to accept this
complacently
and to quietly
go on?”
I say “I've loved you
and I've cared,
we've communed
and we shared,
Now you throw Us away
in a matter of days
as though
we never
existed?”

And you say
“I care,
I really do
but between
me and you
she's here
you're there
yes I still care,
But I'm only being honest,
isn't that what you told me
you wanted?”

And I look at you
tearful eyed
through
heartbroken sighs
and tell
you sadly
contritely
but oh so
"Honestly"

“I lied”.

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-10-15 18:18
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment Nillx. I appreciate it.
Nillx Comment by: Nillx - 2008-10-15 17:05
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Damn. That sums up for me so many things between myself and my ex. Thank you for writing this. Amazing. Vivid yet simple. I could see it in my head and feel it in my heart.
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-09-29 02:41
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It is a beautiful piece and I believe true to many of us who have been in past relationships but didn't want to lose it though it had no future and fought a fight that cannot be won. So it is easy to relate to and very touching! Great work!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-03 07:59
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Thank you unspoken~I have to say, I was very comfortable with that line...and I'm glad you liked it as well...!
Ithiya Comment by: Ithiya - 2008-04-03 01:57
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I loved how it ended. Like something from a story, and pointedly true.
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