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dmiracle
Dylan Miracle
United States, TX, Austin

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The suicide of Fanny Price

The precision of a noose
gives exactitude to sadness.
What before was vague
now has a razor’s edge.

A noose alone is flaccid
I could not wield a noose against you
but its correct use
rafter and rickety stool
no doubts
nothing left for imagining

Noose suicide, noose execution
never a noose fight.
precisely a sad ending
Though I longed for the knife or the gun
to leave you wondering about my final breath
(What bizarre thing lead to this violent fall?)
I should be so precise as a noose

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-03-01 00:22
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The title suits the poem. It has been well written. Thankyou for a great read on this topic after a long time
akabinny Comment by: akabinny - 2008-02-28 20:07
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I like this. It's clever and chilling at the same time. Good write, good title!
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