Musing On an Accoutrement Encounter With Artistic Style
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Musing On an Accoutrement Encounter With Artistic Style
You are
A Renaissance
Romantic I hear, so...
what is with those green-tinged horn-rims
my dear?
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Yes, I decided to take my own advice to others with this one. I told somebody that love was hard to write about so they should try Cheryl's glasses instead. Also, I told Ada Spark that I liked her long title.
Doolally-tapper -- I hadn't heard/read that one before, but it does fit doesn't it? I mean ... look at my picture. |
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Forget last comment about syllables, I was too harsh. 'tinged' can be one syllable and 'Renaissance Romantic' is truly fine, I felt that it needed an 'it' in the fourth line, but read it and it wasn't there.
In life, my dear, you are a contender.
Grae:) |
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Title almost longer than the upload - must be a Constance 'Special'
I do believest thou hast penned a humourous work of some serious credibility. Thouest may be in contention for an award of sorts.
Apart from the syllabic shortfallings which will (no doubt) cause points to be deducted - shame.
Thanks for the laugh-provoking read - Grae:) |
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Comment by: alien - 2008-03-03 08:39
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They're very best Kookai designer plastic rims, actually :P
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Comment by: alien - 2008-03-03 08:38
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Hahahaha. I have to laugh at that - you old doolally-tapper.
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