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Riddles
Simon Purdy
United Kingdom, Derbyshire, Derby

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Gazing in Wonder

Gazing in wonder
Holding you tight
A short embrace
Helps to pass the night

Looking at your face
You smile at me
No one else smiles
Like that which I see

Your heart, amazing
Your beauty, Wow!
I do love you
Would you ask me how?

I would tell you how
Look at your face
How could I not?
You're so full of grace

You're full of great warmth
Your heart is pure
I see your soul
I have found my cure


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RedWitch Comment by: RedWitch - 2008-05-21 04:02
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A very simple but effective poem. The sentments come across almost in a childlike way in its innocence. Well done :)
Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2008-03-02 14:12
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Simon, I liked the focus of this poem. Unlike other poems of this genre your poem didn't come across as too intense. --Robert
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