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Simile13t
S. (Johnny) Thonn
United States, South Carolina

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A Beautiful Melancholy

A Beautiful Melancholy

The contemplation of a beautiful melancholy that I'I am
the prefix of thoughts and the suffix of memories
that I did not find her flesh; I did not find her eyes, her laughter
or her tears. I did not search for this constant. I did not
search for this journey, this moment that disappear like a
morning mist. In the distant of return a melancholy
is born of its suffix. In the elegance of before a tranquility suffers
in its decay. A beautiful melancholy craving the prefix
of the after, the moments before meeting.

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Comment by: - 2006-02-27 21:32
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this poem grabs you like no other. you can really feel the emotion of it. i tuely love it.
Comment by: - 2006-02-24 17:07
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Your work is almost unlike I have ever read on Spoiled Ink. I feel passion in your writing ... passion in your sucbject. I am impressed.

Marc
Comment by: - 2006-02-24 02:11
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nice use of language and playing with the form of the poem. Decent subject matter too, all in all top bananna. keep on keepin on.
Comment by: - 2006-02-24 00:30
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I find this sad, I'm not sure why.

It moved me.
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