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OilsandSyntax
Nikki Niswonger
United States, Ohio

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Wamble Cage

Oh, the Wamble batty caged
Screetching woodwind glithery plumed
Beneath the hearthen quaintness glow
That unsurpasses shacken brood.

We the Nimbly Gleason's spew
Unbequested frothing gnaught
Until the nightly stacken flew
Through gates ammended oathly fraught.

Alas, the dawning of Manshid
Celebrates Zephorrah dew
The rebirth of Naturaackals
Begins the woodwind screetch anew.

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OilsandSyntax Comment by: OilsandSyntax - 2008-03-05 08:21
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Ha ha ha...It looks like I forgot to add the comment to this...it's just nonsense...it doesn't mean anything at all...I wrote it for a nonsense competition on another writer's group so don't feel bad for not understanding it!!!
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-03-04 03:28
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Totally lost s far as understanding what you allude to - outside of my experience - not knowing the references doesn't diminish the peom though, it has a nice feel and flow and is finely wrought. Interesting for sure.
Comment by: - 2008-03-01 19:33
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This seems to be an interesting poem to me.
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