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mattarnold
matt arnold
United States, pacific northwest

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Stretch Armstrong

The best story recalled involved Stretch Armstrong, a childhood memento that was little more than a glorified pull toy. It was made from some sort of space-age material that could withstand any amount of stretching subjected upon it. No matter how hard his limbs were pulled, they would never snap off. And the young boys tried with all their might.

Rick worshiped his Stretch Armstrong, and it was his prized toy back that summer when he was about eight and Stan four. Stan got mad at his brother over something that neither could now remember, stole Stretch, and hid him in the oven of all places. Later that afternoon, their mother turned on the appliance to preheat it for dinner. Rick was playing happily on the kitchen floor and noticed a bright ball of flames inside the oven and pointed it out calmly to his mother. Stretch had reached his flashpoint and had burst into a dense fireball. Stan had stumbled upon dear old Stretch’s kryptonite, temperatures above four hundred degrees Fahrenheit. Their mother fearfully opened up the oven door to investigate. Rick screamed in agony at the sight of one clearly recognizable arm rising up from an otherwise formless burning chunk of plastic, emitting a dense cloud of black toxic smoke. A small secondary fire was formed by molten blobs of burning plastic dripping down onto the oven floor. Obsidian flakes of soot drifted out of the open oven, settling everywhere, like a demonic bastard son of snowfall.

Later that night, when all had calmed down, Their father used a hacksaw to cut Stretch’s remains free from the oven rack, around which it had melted, reformed, and become one with. Rick insisted on keeping the corpse, little more than a softball-sized chunk of tar-like rock with one deformed arm rising in agony. When inspected closely, it resembled Rodin’s epic bronze sculpture The Gates of Hell, with all sorts of twisted forms embedded in the charred surface. For years, Rick kept it religiously on a shelf in his room, unable to part with his incinerated toy.

Excert from: An Open Universe by Matt Arnold

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kpguevarra Comment by: kpguevarra - 2008-04-09 18:25
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i'm not familiar with that Stretch Armstrong, but this is quite nice and entertaining. think about chopping the big chunk of paragraph there for a smoother read. :)
lancslass Comment by: lancslass - 2008-03-26 14:24
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Interesting and entertaining. My son had a Stetch Armstrong. I remember it well. Your descriptions are excellent and I saw the poor chap in the oven when he reached his flashpoint. Thanks for an enjoyable read.
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2008-03-26 13:18
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isn't it interesting how some of our most vivid memories are those we experience as children? you have done a fine job giving voice to this experience, conveying the meaningful as only an adult can reflecting upon childhood. funny, well-written, very tight and concise--and yet just enough 'umph' to really be moving and memorable. thanks for a great read!
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GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2008-03-23 16:51
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oh man...this is so tragic...and yet i laughed

sweet read...thank you
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2008-03-22 19:24
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I remember ol' stretch! No one in my family had one but my neighbor's brother did. We teased him about playing with dolls.

Your description of poor delapadated Stretch, after his damnation to oven hell, is priceless. I can just see it all take place in the kitchen. Of course you don't have mom's thoughts on the subject of the fire in the stove. I would have gone ballistic.

My husband set food soaking in grease in the oven to bake once and started a fire. Gee-I was ready to poke a stick up his 'you know what' and toast him like a shish-k-bob!
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