The place for writers: Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world. Learn how other writers are doing it.
The traces make me ill
I'm tired of the spill
Far removed
Please Leave!
And your eyes haunt me
Can you hear this
Wish I could scream
remove yourself
Please Leave!
Anger here
Careless
Do you like this?
Credit less
PLEASE LEAVE
Can you hear this?
From the everyday
Remove yourself from me
Because I'm tired of seeing your face.
Want to comment on this Poetry? Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
I love the hostility and hurt of these words!
Don't quite understand what "Credit less" means, but...Needs more description, e.g. HOW do the eyes haunt? HOW do you scream? Describe the anger. You just need to flesh it out so WE can feel it.
