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untoldstoriesx3
Brittney Gress
United States, pa, Middletown

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Jail

Small confined area,
white-washed walls.
The toilet in the corner
spreads a rancid smell throughout the room.
The tiny little cubicle area
slowly enclosing you in the longer you stare.
Your mind completely haunting you as you do nothing except think, think, think.. constantly.
This place is disturbingly imaginary.
It all feels like a dream, yet soon as its over you realize how very existent it really is.

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driftersonline Comment by: driftersonline - 2008-05-24 16:32
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You nailed it.
jtlt333 Comment by: jtlt333 - 2008-04-25 09:52
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I like it. Although it is very short, the words place the reader in the cell to experience the insanity of being locked up.
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