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Gregory
Gregory Dancer
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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How bad is it?

When I look for
words to write
and all there is
is "I Love you"
How bad is that?

When I look away
and still
See you
"I love you"
How bad is that?

All I can
remember is
seconds by your
side
"I love you"
How bad is that?

Without you
I'm loosing my
mind;because
"I love you"
How bad is that?

Why do
"I love you?"
I just know
"I love you"
But can't show
"I love you"
I want to let go,
but;
"I love you"
And I can never
truly
"I love you"
How bad is this?

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Loloix Comment by: Loloix - 2008-03-06 05:33
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love is such a difficult subject to write esp. in poetry..
but u did it in a very evocative verse.. nice read..
menoh Comment by: menoh - 2008-03-05 19:54
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I love the simplicity in the words, powerful, without sounding too preachy. It is plain and raw human emotion and many people will identify with this.
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