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Gregory
Gregory Dancer
United Kingdom, Oxfordshire, Banbury

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A bit shit

You make isn’t into is
The was, to will ,the will to whenever.
Something’s in to certain forever’s.
Spell it out, drag me in.
A virtue of romantic sin.
A reason of emotion
Hidden in a mindful wit.
But; most of all you make me
Write stuff like this.
heartfelt, but a bit shit.

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mattarnold Comment by: mattarnold - 2008-03-05 17:43
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interesting. very interesting. On the first read, it seemed like giberish. I read it a few times then picked up on the cadance. Sort of like staring at those 3D photos where suddenly the image jumps out. Once I picked up on the tempo, it makes sense. Perhaps it is song lyrics which if put to music would pace it. Anyway, certainly for those who will spend a few minutes reading a poem and digesting it mentally........m
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-03-05 17:16
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Wow, I don't understand it at all..... It's gots alot of purty wordz tho. =B
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