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Jeannie Zheng
United States, NH, nashua

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The Unknown

Sitting on the edge of a rainbow,
Staring into the deep unknown.
Welcome to my fantasy life,
Whether to come is for you to decide.

But ponder on this:
Death is only a matter of time.
So why don’t you give in now,
And take my hand.

Let’s take a detour,
Down to a valley
Where fantasy is
Just a realm of reality.

Get lost in the labyrinth,
Leave it for fate to decide.
Let go for once,
And taste the sweetness of life

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menoh Comment by: menoh - 2008-03-05 19:56
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Wow, the whole 'carpe diem' vibe is great. To abandon all and live is indeed a dream and fantasy of many....wonderful piece.
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