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i'm drowning in this crystal blue
it's waves are engulfing my being
they're gently wrapping me up in anguish
slowly taking over
as i tumble around in their calm mass of soft blue
and comfort
amidst all this confusion
the brilliant blue fades
as i get caught up in its beauty
without knowing
it has the inevitable ability to make me lose myself
in its calm stage
as it slowly rages deep below me
a storm of dark blue emerges
creating hell beneath my feet
and i don't
even notice
i'm too busy
relaxing my troubled mind
as the storm makes its way up
my blood's bubbling
into a magnificent white
as i surface from this
deep
depressing
blue
again i'm wrapped up into a comforting
practically weightless
state
crystal clear as the blue beneath me
the milky white that surrounds me glows
and i realize i've come to find myself
cradled
in its wonderful arms again
high above anything
and everything
i'm simply
untouchable
no way to bring me
back to this solid ground
i'm free falling in my lovely white
and there's no end
no stopping me now
until my heart and soul
are calm enough
to gently float back down
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written on 3-5-08 at 10:00 P.M.
[in text message, because there was no paper or pen available]
another piece scribbled down. or umm, maybe more like aimlessly typed up on my phone. but either way it's the same. it needs work. so gimme your input :] it would be greatlly appreciated
