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Memories of a forgotten season
Unbidden, come to mind
Sad departures
Joyful reunions
Lessons that were taught
Memories of a forgotten time
Hold dear what is treasured
Friends of old
Pets long ago
Family that has not been seen
Memories of the future come
As days go by for everyone
Future loves
Family growth
Friends for me and you
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Yes Wildefriend I did have something in mind when I wrote this poem. The problem is when I write not everything comes to the front of my mind for writing. Its more a feeling than anyting else and I can't always put those feelings into words. However I will try to do more as you have requested.
this is nice the way it is, but I think there's another level of expression you could reach if you were daring, if you could briefly and economically talk in greater detail about some of the departures, reunions, friends, pets. I have a sense that you have specific images in mind. Why not describe them?
