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Writerofamillion
LeVert Patterson
United States, Ohio, Cincinnati

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What more can I say

What more can I say
By: Levert Patterson
This world is filled with so many people around the world and problems happens for many. Poverty hits most of the continents, little children die or killed for the wrong reason, as I learned don’t take life for granted and always give when you can. As I sit at my table and eat my dinner over in another country a boy, girl, women, or man strive to get one bite of anything. Nothing funny when you find out that you have a disease that is not curable, go to Africa and there is more disease that hunts the people flesh. Looking at today Sex, Money, Drugs, and killings hits this world hard.
Sex is one of the problems of today; some teenagers find that sex is the big talk of America. Aids or even a STD is the biggie in the United Stated. Young women get an abortion when they find they are not ready and guys find their self falling away from the situation. Money is the killer, a person if so thirty for a dollar will kill someone for chunk change. Drugs from coke, Mary J, Mushrooms, blow the world up with its high. Some children or Teens inherit the step of taking a quick puff of the Dro or taking a sip of the 40ounce. Some drugs or most drugs can kill someone. Killing is the number one common death. People in the war zone suffer loses of their comrades.
America could sometimes be a war zone gangs, thieves, and even regular people find themselves killing someone they know, or hate, or even just don’t know at all. Sad family and friends cries at a good person funeral because they were shot and killed in a near drive-by. School is a killer for a lot of people high school is the most. Senior get ready to graduate, but some played so much in school that it was to late to where the GPA was to low, a random person might drop out and say what’s the point. School isn’t a joke and really nothing to be played with it might get hard but in the future it will get even harder, but at the end when you are done and finish you will realized that you have accomplished what you needed to do for yourself. That what my grandmother always tells me and I believe her along with when she always correcting my grammar. I slouch on the couch to see that more troops are being sent to war my opinion is don’t send more soldiers when man and woman are ready to come home and have to stay another extra 6 months but that’s just me what I think should happen. Greedy people to jealous people also fill the world, but you just have to learn that people will always be jealous and envy no matter what. All races of every color have had their time of trouble Blacks with the slavery, Jews with the Germans Hitler, Asians with the Sars and so on. If the world just get along this world would be a better place till then there will be more drama ahead. Nevertheless, there is hope!

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chant1 Comment by: chant1 - 2008-03-08 16:48
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I feel your poem 100% Keep up the good work more will be revealed
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