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TequilaTwilight
Mercedes Dawson
United Kingdom, Manchester

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That Thing

Mother told you
Mother told you
Mother told you lies.

Nice girls wash,
Watch their mouths,
Clean behind their ears
And that dirty little thing.

Schoolboy shamed you
Schoolboy shamed you
Schoolboy shamed those thighs.

Pull up your skirt
Kissy catch me
Spin that bottle
Show that dirty little thing.

Blood disowned you
Blood disowned you
Blood disowned a wombs demise.

Turn inside out
Flush out that seed
Let me be released
From that dirty little thing.

Dirty little dirty little dirty litte…

But lover showed you
Oh how lover showed you
Lover showed you power cries

Touch that beauty
Touch it again
love that love oh baby,
that sweet dirty little thing.

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Sophia Comment by: Sophia - 2008-03-27 04:24
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I like the way you've given this a tempo and rhythm almost like a nursary rhyme, or a crooning feeling.
drgnflygrl Comment by: drgnflygrl - 2008-03-10 21:39
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WOW...this is fantastic! The pacing is beautiful and the repetition is exact. I love this!
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