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Miyazaki K
Miyazaki Nagato
United States

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The Coming Day

Deeper in the blue sky,
Illusionary dreams are whiter,
Wings scatter into a thousand pieces.

The original sin is bloodier,
The calling voice is farther,
We fulfill ourselves for that coming day...

The current breezes higher,
Eternity grows into sapphire
With the wandering memories.

The lake darkens,
The hymn sings out purely,
We waken and open our eyes...

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ningchang Comment by: ningchang - 2008-03-18 20:59
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very good imagery. I like it.
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