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breebreewillis
brianna willis
Canada, ontario, sarnia

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reminder.

sitting in the silent night.

vivid pictures in my mind.

sitting by the river red.

falling yellow on my head.

sky and sea simply blend.

my heart, these pictures start to mend.

remember days when my heart bled

all those days as good as dead.

remember days of winter gray.

all of our time flew away.

sitting at a window cold.

watching all the games get old.

summer nights,summer love

on the roof,stars above.

thinking of my future pain

hope you don't regret my name.

remember time like a movie

all thoughts,trailing slowly.

eyes fighting to stay awake.

regreting nothing,no mistake.

i close my eyes,and rest my mind

as all of me dies in time.

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lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray - 2008-03-13 18:42
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wow this is great!!!
Miyazaki K Comment by: Miyazaki K - 2008-03-12 11:32
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Quite excellent.
malecman Comment by: malecman - 2008-03-08 20:16
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:D
that was terrific.
i'm gonna settle for genious!
chant1 Comment by: chant1 - 2008-03-08 14:15
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THAT WAS REMARKABLE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND MAY YOU BE BLESSED
Writerofamillion Comment by: Writerofamillion - 2008-03-07 23:19
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WOW that was really good
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