writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
missymegs21
Meghan Meghan
United States, IL, Chicago

Words: 145
Access: Public
Comments: 4

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




21

Itching for you may be the worst. Lying behind you, an arm draped over your hips, lips pressing against your poorly shaved neck. You cut corners, especially me, until late at night when missing me seems ok and maybe more, just right. You have a way of making my logic inexplicable. You’ve made me beyond me. you make my dreams so strange, I don’t understand this work of yours. I don’t understand these words, strangely not yours but somehow…. In fact I miss them, even the ones I can’t define. Leaving you is epic, every fucking time. I just wish you knew what I’ve given or would give to simply love all of you, every moment, every pore, every word, every sigh, mine…but I think maybe you do know and I think maybe it’s a bit too much.

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-03-10 04:32
Add to Readers
      
Bitter sweet and thought provoking and more gentle in the feel of it than some of your other pieces. I liked the bit about cutting corners and the observation about him probably knowing how you feel. I like that the guys in your work always seem like shadows.
'I don't understand this work of yours,' is a terrific line.
MalcolmMcColl Comment by: MalcolmMcColl - 2008-03-09 23:33
Add to Readers
      
I feel hairy
saih Comment by: saih - 2008-03-09 21:51
Add to Readers
      
Pretty good.
Still thinking Comment by: Still thinking - 2008-03-09 21:01
Add to Readers
      
nice one
1

Sponsored Ads


By missymegs21

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S