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When there's nothing
going on and there's
no where to go
No one is home
and
No one cares
Reach inside and see
there's
just
nothing
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Okay makes no sense.. Isn't it obvious that you wont find anything in emptiness nut looking deep in your poem I guess I do find your meaning.. Man is born a social animal and cannot live without others. Concentrate more on the grammar and punctuation.. It's an amazing read overall.
