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Ruby lips
smeared with acid kisses
Purple viens
bleeding with washed up wishes
Blue lines
it never was your color
Black eyes
as dead as a flower
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Cool.. This is kinda funny or I guess that's just my way of putting it. Use punctuation and give space between the lines.. somehow it gives a better feel.. This is freaky though who are you talking about?? I hope it isn't affecting your life..
