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Grinding, sliding
sweat rolling off her skin.
Bodies converge,
spirits intertwine,
a soft moan escapes her lips.
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wow, what you have is intense, and exotic, i love it....
you should continue with what else occurs during intercourse, but you don't want to make it exotica so make sure you use appropriate synonyms alright....
but definitely keep working on this one.......
