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deathrite
jewel hardin
United States, North Carolina, Mount Airy

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eventually

voices speak
they ask
"whats the matter?"
"are you okay?"
My voice replies
"nothing."
"im fine."
eventually the voices go away
eventually you believe the lies
eventually you stop feeling
then you break
you fall apart
and no ones there to care
because eventuslly you push them all away

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spiritedpony Comment by: spiritedpony - 2008-05-06 05:22
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So many times I have felt just this way!!
You write with much emotion.
deathrite Comment by: deathrite - 2008-04-24 08:09
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yeah
its sad when we are all so scared to say anything because we're scared of being rejected
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-04-24 01:33
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Isn't sad that we become the numb liars due to the sad irony of truth?Great piece.
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-04-20 18:15
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ah. this is about the day you went all
"I don't fit in" on the posse, right?
you know you belong with us.
but, this is a good poem, lol.
Miyazaki K Comment by: Miyazaki K - 2008-04-01 15:54
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Very good. I like it.
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