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Jack Absolute
Jane Boatman
Canada, BC, Kelowna

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Une fleur ouverte (French)

Et, il me demande s’il me mieux comprendrait,
Sous le soleil chaud, sur la pelouse verte.
Je souriais et je commençais se demander.
Je me sentais comme une fleur ouverte.

Nous avons fait l’ascension de la montagne,
Regardé les étoiles brillantes découvertes
Et le soleil de minuit. Avec la matinée,
Nous sommes intimes, et mon âme triste est rouverte.

Maintenant, notre amour beau est éclatant
De santé, comme les asphodèles fleurissant.
Ne me quitte jamais, je ne rêve pas seule.

Oui, toutes fleurs belles meurent dans l’hiver froid,
Mais les cœurs des fleurs vivent toujours comme mémoires,
Attentant sous le neige, suivre leurs aïeuls.

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Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend Online- 2008-06-15 12:21
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I am not that great in French, but I can smell the essence of your words. C'est un songe!

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