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jgilgun
Jane Gilgun
United States, Minnesota, Minneapolis

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A Full Moon with Horses

A full moon
silver light
a herd of horses
chewing grass
in the far pastures
breathing gently
swishing tails
stillness
quiet
time has no meaning
to horses

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-09 06:01
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I very much like the image in the poem. Well done!
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-04-05 13:29
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How well you defined the picture, like I was looking at it. :)
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-03-16 10:52
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Thanks, Mage. It was a magic moment. The horses let me into the herd. They watched me but did not change anything in their behavior.

Jane
The Mage Comment by: The Mage - 2008-03-15 13:50
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What a picture you have made here!!!
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