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chancm16
Crystal Chan
United States, il, chicago

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After the flu

The wet streets surprise her.
Limp leaves, thawed earth, and the
silent
tips of mushrooms
impregnate each blustery breeze.

She staggers, open-mouthed.
The bright spread of sky devours
the white, peeling ceiling of her room;
The roving, sonorous wind drowns
the thin hisses of her humidifier.

This time last year there were blizzards,
deep and ancient:
today come floods and tornadoes
and streets slick with rain.
The sky glows blankets of clouds,
the streets strange golden with sidelight from the winter sun.

Winds warmer than recorded time
Frenetically fondle her hair, her body.
She blinks, fingering the Kleenex still in her pocket
And thinks how different this world is, how different

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sadon Comment by: sadon - 2008-03-14 13:51
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VIVID.
Its wonderful*
Daniel Car Crash Comment by: Daniel Car Crash - 2008-03-14 09:45
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i liked this. The word kleenex i found painfully ugly and jarring though... tissue?
dunno, just my two pennies.
dcc.
Writerofamillion Comment by: Writerofamillion - 2008-03-13 20:29
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This was a good poe, really good
Joey Comment by: Joey - 2008-03-13 16:23
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I like this one. It reminds me of home.
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