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You
Saw your smile from a distance,
Saw you succeed and fall in love;
with great persistence.
Saw you walk on by with your future
Of advancement and momentum;
Saw you inhabit your dreams and vision,
Saw you achieve and conquer the world we live in;
Why do I see more of you, and nothing of me?
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-03-20 17:56
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| Very good read! It puts me into thinking---- of my life, your life and the life of those we see every day. "Why do I see more of you, nothing of me?" |
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Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-03-18 06:08
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| Good question! Who is this person? Give me some a telling detail about the cock of the head, the walk, a piece of clothing--you with your grandfather's scarf around your neck reminding you that you were loved once with no room for me--or something like that |
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Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-03-18 06:08
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| Good question! Who is this person? Give me some a telling detail about the cock of the head, the walk, a piece of clothing--you with your grandfather's scarf around your neck reminding you that you were loved once with no room for me--or something like that |
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