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Comment by: larciero Online- 2008-04-04 07:07
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| very intriguing piece. The first line is what did me in I love that first line. I also loved, "I teach blind circuits, I preach" fantastical ... indeed. |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2008-03-31 16:11
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| Sorry, I didn't get the Paris Hilton thing right away either- I don't know why I didn't at least get the name and I think it was through my own deficiencies and not anything in the way you wrote it. I can't give my opinion content-wise, since i try to steer clear of entertainment news (why should I waste my life finding out about how others waste theirs). However, there is a good beat and flow to the poem that comes out of the word choice. |
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Comment by: LadyMoon Online- 2008-03-31 13:05
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Loved the piece.
Could not stop thinking about this:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=jWD0TuGM8jY
She should be banned for this. |
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Comment by: mrsspark Online- 2008-03-28 15:25
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| Aargh. Drew a blank! I'm wallowing in pre-caffeine Thunderpen mode. I clocked Paris Hilton - I've heard of her, but know none of the details, other that she's famous for being rich and daft. To an ignoramus such as myself this reads as a lovely lilting, teasing cryptic crossword clue. Am going to down a bottle of red and come back later... |
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Comment by: Dakota - 2008-03-25 03:48
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Tight wonderment encapsulated!
'spread stained wings'
Sad and true
The hemlock line is so revealing
I like the Gnostic reference as well
A literalist damsel crashes... Shame on us really
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