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drchase
dante cox
United States, new york, newburgh

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Heart on Sleeve

Heart On Sleeve

Whole new state of mind...feelin like a brand new man

When my pen hit the pad...its feelin like a brand new hand

Its a brand new year...got a brand new plan

Im sittin on an island wit my brand new sand

But in my land...i want to meet someone that has confidence

A girl that speaks her mind and makes me laff and not incompetant

Im picturin one wit a beautiful smile...nice rear view

And friendly most of the time but knows when to be rude

I'll treat as special as she makes me feel...give P.O.D.

Not lookin for money orders or C.O.D.

Cuz i had girls that i can compare to a pencil

Lasted a while broke it off without a second to think

I cudnt make a picture pretty wit them usin a stencil

Had some pens...hard to keep for a day still run outta ink

had stalkers...only had my shadows lookin darker

But see me...im lookin for a permentant Sharpie marker

Had a 3...a 2...two 5s and a 10

But somehow when i start to smile i think of them again

And i tell them how i feel but i come off too real

And i think suttin so sincere cant stay concealed

Seein life thru a brand new pair of eyes too

i cant help restore life but i can prolly help revive u

Speakin thru a brand new pair of lips...maybe hard to believe

Speak my mind and ready the real thing...wearin my heart on my sleeve

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chant1 Comment by: chant1 - 2008-04-12 11:56
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I love this poem! And I like the way that you used alternate spellings for some of the words. Your talented and keep up the good work
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