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johnnycoolhand
Johnny Coolhand
United States, wisconsin, milwaukee

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the ape drawn sled

serpentine fever
the continent it strikes
again
now its gone
but like the serpent
its only recoiling
give it
moments
decades
give it
consciousness and dreams
give it all it
isn't and all that
it seems
its deadly yes
its intoxicating maybe
if i said yes i
would not be intoxicated
i am fully alive
at least i think so but
that is what i paid for,
YES?

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lilgoldenray Comment by: lilgoldenray - 2008-03-25 17:32
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This one makes me feel reflective for some reason... I like the style alot but the title leaves me confused... all your titles do actually... :(
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