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aprilmayed
April Michelle Bratten
United States, North Dakota, Minot

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Sparks

He is a tight balloon
dangling his poetry in the air.

I am full of want.

I breathe in his stasis
and bend to stretch across the grass.

He laughs without motion,
blowing streams of hot air across my ribs,
bowing in my body.

My neck curves in the green.

He has phrases that have pushed me,
forming apple after apple to rest upon my forehead.

I would pick his metaphor clean from the sky,
sink in my teeth,
and eat,

but he will not speak.

He has lost his words in the colder water,
sending up an arm, a shoe, to tread upstream.

Used to his still, his new movements sadden me.
His mind is the river that floods by my house.

I am bare-footed,
open and spread across the bank,
as his words dive off a duck’s back,

wetting free feather.

Somehow he will find his way back to me,
to dry his hair in the shelter of my lap.

I will scoop sand over his calm face,
burying his clean.

We are sparks, content with only closeness,
as neither of us have any intentions to ignite.

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Stephie Comment by: Stephie - 2008-04-05 01:31
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April, you know that I love this poem, its imagery is much more aggressive than in your typical write...which, I suppose is a bit ironic considering its intent.

" We are sparks, content with only closeness,
as neither of us have any intentions to ignite."

Those last two lines really resonate within me. I just sit here, reading it, andnod when I get to those lines. I nod.
champagne Comment by: champagne - 2008-04-04 11:29
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The romance of William Tell, the tragedy of Burroughs and metaphorical love of the way water loves a drowning victim. Interesting language used in such a unique way. Surreal and mildly erotic. I enjoyed this poem.
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-03-23 13:24
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Sensual is the word to describe this - moving and beautiful - unique yes - totally. I love your work - and this poem very much so. I adore your words.
bounarjaf Comment by: bounarjaf - 2008-03-23 12:51
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I like the way you relate love and poetry and weave these together with uniquely sensual images. You have a powerful and original style. I was a bit confused by the line ´Used to his still, his new movements sadden me.´ I would put stillness.
MitchellNoel Comment by: MitchellNoel - 2008-03-22 23:34
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That is absolutely beautiful. You have such a unique/original/fresh voice. So many colours and images. I'm not sure why, the apples didn't sit well with me. Maybe they just didn't flow with the rest? The closing lines were the highlight for me. Thanks!
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