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Like foamy champagne
bottled emotions uncorked
taste sweet and sourly.
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Thats what love is like in the first stages ~ love the above ~ 'bottled emotions uncorked' ~ just wish that lasted thruout the relationships ~ ah ~ again like you wrote ..at first sweet then it goes sour LOL
