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| This is a great introspective piece. Great questions... tough questions. And you're def not alone.. although on your own specific path you are. Honestly I don't know if it's possible to 'know' where we're going. Everytime that I'm sure I do.. I go through another period of confusion like this... starting all over again.. Great job though. |
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Comment by: Dante - 2008-05-01 21:18
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You're not the only one, there pitbull. I think that most writers, in some sense, feel alienated. I guess that why we write - keeps us sane.
I liked the poem. You put it all on the line and it rang true. Thanks for sharing, D. |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-04-23 00:43
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| yeah it feels great that you feel the same way! I exactly fell alienated sometimes..like there could be so many people around me but I would feel so lonely coz no one has a clue...thanx I realy appriciate it |
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Comment by: briana - 2008-04-15 15:23
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It's so funny that you posted this, cuase on the drive home today I was thinking about alot of things. Then I started thinking "god, does anyone else think about shit like this?" I feel like I'm the only one in this world ever obzerving, and comptemplating, and running through things a thousand times. So it's really comforting to know there someone else out there like that. This is a really good piece.
"And there is no- one to guide me
Lonely in my own thoughts that only I know" |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-03-27 18:09
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| sometimes I feel as if nobody understands me in a way that they are different to me...I was hoping you guys would like it and maybe relate...let me know what you think |
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