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Midden
Colin Williamson
United Kingdom, Scotland, Carluke

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A Time Before Reason.

Silence touches the Golden Lands,
the years just melt away,
stripping ribbons of gold and black
away from the land of pity.
Can you touch the sun?
Feel its radiance burn?
Pity falls on those who tried
to conquer the fair way,
that flourished and settled
across the gold topped meadow.

Sweet couples with flowers in their hair
copulate and wave their feelings there,
haunting the moon back into hiding
behind the clouds of silver flare.
They cast a frown upon the time
that settles in the mountain range,
haunting the trolls who gather there...
tying flowers in their own tangled hair.
Shrieking at the humans
who mock and steal their children,
who will never again
enter the Golden Lair.

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Mick Comment by: Mick - 2008-03-28 04:01
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I try to conquer the fairway most weekends... only ending up with a score of well above the card.... this however, scores an even par with me.
You had me in the moment there for a second an other than the pun I've made here, I can only commend you on your efforts. Great write. Loved it. :)
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