writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
xXLupaXx
L Baird
United States, Washington, Kent

Words: 167
Access: Public
Comments: 1

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




Dear Somebody

Dear Somebody,

I’m sorry
I screwed up
And now we’re screwed
I only hope you forgive me
And we can return to the way things where

Can you blame me?
I did what and girl would do
That was the only normal thing I did all day
But maybe that’s why we’re friends
Because I’m abnormal

I just wanted to say I’m sorry
And that these are the last tears I shed.
I’ll wake up tomorrow
Get dressed
Cover my wrists
And put on a happy mask

I just wanted to say I’m sorry
That I screwed up, bad.
And I deserve ever ray of anger you send my way

Cancer will grow where my heart was ripped out
And spread throughout my body
It will consume me
And I will die
And you will keep living

Maybe you’ll mourn for a little while
But eventually you will forget me.

I just wanted to say I’m sorry

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
SnowflakeRose Comment by: SnowflakeRose - 2008-03-28 12:46
Add to Readers
      
Don't beat yourself up so much. No one deserves cancer no matter what you did. Its good to get your feelings out though. This piece makes me sad to know someone is hurting like this. Be strong and you can get through this. If you really screwed up bad don't make excuses. Accept responsibility for your actions. Don't pity yourself and talk to the other person about this.
1

Sponsored Ads


By xXLupaXx

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S