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This is Still All of Me
This is still... all of me
Tantricly, sexually
Egoicly...
The entire range and array
All that you can handle
All that you can't...
All that I can't handle yet as well
All that I've accepted,
All that I haven't,
CAN'T!.. ok... won't (ugh)
All the thoughts, desires,
Sexual fantasies...
Obsessions, repressed emotions
Like it or not
Socially accepted or taboo
I don't care anymore
Do you?
It doesn't even matter
Whether or not
I accept it all...
...it doesn't change the 'fact'
This is still all of me
March 27, 2008
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Hey! Those were unique words..Tantricly, egoicly..well tantric is a Hindu concept where through sex the divinity or salvation is acieved. That makes it bold enough and gels with the essence of your poem.
This is really good in the sense that the poet also is vulnerable to his overpowering passions and is at the same time strong enough to not let go of this.That's Honesty and purity of soul.
Excellent work.Thanks for the read.
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| that was a cool piece. I could see myself just cast into that picture |
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