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Apollo
Vincent Slade
United States, Virginia, Richmond

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Men and Demons

Pain in me is dark and deepens.
Kill me, before chaos consumes
Dreams of men lost deep in monsoons.
Quick! For Hell shall release demons...

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ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2008-04-22 22:22
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Short, to the point. Well done. J
brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-04-11 05:00
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Very powerful using few words. I admire how you can get your point across so succinctly!
Willow Comment by: Willow - 2008-04-09 18:30
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I am so damn proud of you. Amazing how four lines of verse can encompass the intensity of forever.

You are my hero.
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2008-04-06 05:39
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Depths

Keep on going, discovering, seeking

Smile Vincent :) nice share
Apollo Comment by: Apollo - 2008-04-01 12:51
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Ask and ye shall receive...
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