Dreams on a long, cold nairobi night
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Dreams on a long, cold nairobi night
I do not know what it is i am drowning in,
Fish me out before its too late.
Heart pounding,
Sweat raining,
And darkness all around to mask the crime unfolding.
Victim that i am,
awaiting impending slaughter,
unyielding to the faceless relentless masters of my alien thoughts.
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| Thanks for the comment frank. I don't quite understand the "drowning into" bit. Is it a grammatical or stylistic issue? |
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| thanks. i really appreciate all the comments |
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| nice little piece quite deep, i like that |
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| Nice work. I like its directness, which though simple, yet did not betray its rich stock of imagery. But I want u to look at the first line again. I think it should read "drowning into" |
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