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frankman
Uchenna Franklin
Nigeria, Kaduna State, Kaduna

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THE LAMB

He rode on a lowly beast
jugging through the ancient streets
wearing smiles on his cheeks
trampling on garments and leaves
All he said was good
men’s ears itched for more
if he’d danced to their tune
laurel wreaths would have graced his skull

A dozen grouped with him to sup
but sunk quietly into their shells
and filled the hall with sighs

When the whole world went to sleep
coarse hands rumpled the fragile lamb
to sundry on a cursed stake
and moisten the earth with royal sap
and barter his life for their sake

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dspriggs Comment by: dspriggs - 2008-03-30 20:04
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Absolutely beautiful and I agree with Brandi Lei, you summed it up very well. I am amazed that so much comes from so few words! I look forward to reading more!
Brandi Lei Comment by: Brandi Lei - 2008-03-29 23:31
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you have summed up the magnificent/hard life of jesus christ very well in this short piece
Brandi Lei Comment by: Brandi Lei - 2008-03-29 23:31
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you have summed up the magnificent/hard life of jesus christ very well in this short piece
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