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tootwitchy
Adam Keen
United States, georgia, Atlanta

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better yet...

So say hello and I'll say goodbye
and save us both the time
and save us both a life.

Because I know if I pursue
then Ill be sure to ruin
if not both of us then surely you.

better yet...

I'll look you in the eye
and you look me in the eye
and just keep walking by
and save us both the time
and save us both a life.

Because I know if I pursue
then I'll be sure to ruin
if not both of us then surely you.

better yet...

I'll just stay inside.

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canne mills Comment by: canne mills Online- 2008-09-20 13:32
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hey by any chance did this start life as song lyrics ?
Comment by: - 2008-05-28 17:34
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Clean honest lyrics...not overstated, I love it!
Comment by: - 2008-03-31 09:12
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"an just keep walking bye"--Like the play on words.
Did you mean to write 'and' instead of 'an'?

Keep it up!
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