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ausura90
Rachel Ausura
United States, va, newport news

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Endless Speech

Gaping mouth,
pouring out
nothing but pain
disguised by rosy phrases,
intertwined with razors-
do not tell me of reality
or how I should be
according to you
who knows nothing but illusion
and pointless talk,
always talk
never do
that is you-
spewing poison
through your “truth”

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miakarnofsky Comment by: miakarnofsky - 2008-05-22 09:40
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this is really good. I think it puts into words what I've been trying to say about a particular person for a while. nice job
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-05-02 07:47
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This reminded me of a few people that shall remain nameless but unfortunately have also been a "muse" to some of my poems. Well some good came out of the rubbish right? ;) Nice write.
jgilgun Comment by: jgilgun - 2008-03-31 12:22
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Sounds like you know one preachy judgmental person. You make your points tartly. Good work, nicely done.
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