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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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pleadings revised

please
don't let me down
or break me
don't take me down a path
which leads
to my destruction...
…just love me...
…...need me...
and if you promise
not to bleed me
…dry ...
all that I am
will be
all
you'll ever need ...

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-12 21:05
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Oh crows, if I could write a magical spell, we'd all be wearing gloriousy contented smiles~
crows Comment by: crows - 2008-06-12 20:47
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*waves from the same boat Brokenwing is in*

Short and (bitter)sweet. Next, will you write us a magical spell to ensnare that possibly wayward, wanting someone and make them understand the extent of what we are? (goddesses, obviously!)
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-12 09:45
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Wilde, thank you~

Brokenwing, we all feel this way at some point in our lives my friend...your own work speaks of these feelings quite nicely...
brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-06-12 05:52
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Wish I had written this myself. Exemplifies perfectly how I feel about someone in my life. As usual, outstanding writing.
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-06-11 23:17
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Very simple--understated. Not over the top. Well done, m'dear!
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