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Travis Jhue
Travis Kidd
United States, Kentucky, Pikeville

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Down And Out Downunder.

Two drinks at the airport bar, we're going far no need to stall.

Enough about me and you, where we're going, I really don't care at all.

Born to lose and dying to win.

I never wanna go back home again.

You've been known to break more than hearts.

Another round on me, we'll forget about who we were.

When we were lost.

Patsy Cline on the radio with all the right words, you're making me fall to pieces.

The feeling in your heart, forget about it when were down and out down under.

You escape every night, excite me please don't write me.

The paragraphs.

And the sauna in your eyes, the sauna is so magical, when we were lost.

From L.A. to Sidney your face is as magical as Disney.

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fallenxstar Comment by: fallenxstar - 2008-04-07 19:24
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... and I like the line "You've been known to break more than hearts"

I've known a few of those types. very nice, again. i enjoyed reading this one as well.
draco101 Comment by: draco101 - 2008-04-06 20:07
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"Born to lose and dying to win" i like this line
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