writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
johnnycoolhand
Johnny Coolhand
Online
United States, wisconsin, milwaukee

Words: 334
Access: Public
Comments: 1

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




inside the naive euphoria of a painters mind in love

testing
one two
testing
one two
drowning down
& all i can do
done lost

wild hurricanes confound the docile windmill
super molasses on the back of tibetan frogs

call & talk
about
the crasy
jackhammers that sweat through the babylon Sphynx

ah man
they so crasy
i can't believe
mine eyes
all i see
coming all
around is
unbelieveableness

its all so crasy

computer CaddyShackles
AllStar WonDerMuses
one cannon two blade canopys
the windsor dinosaurs
hickleberry cranberry fairies
thromson juliet

i'm sick so much
from sunappleflowers

just some time from crasy...

.......
PLEASE!
.......

...part-time SuperPort
to
crash down for all
to stay asleep...


GIANT EIGHT
FOOT TALL WOMAN
COPPER SKIN
BLACK & LONG & WAVY
AS YOU HOLD AS REINS
HAIR
BIG THICK COMFORTABLE JUISY EDIBLE DELICIOUS STRONG
LEGS

GIANT

pick me up &
carry me to a top
of mountain
high

its a cave
full of silk
pillows & incense
its all on a
mountain
a giant
purple red flaming
mountain
clouds of
navy & green
swishing metallic silver
like the odyssey gave
back for more
again

Belfast SuperDragons
Carnival Psychedelia
Astral IncrediCommodores
come see my explosion
my wagon
come watch
now
i will do
everything
to
explode

but i
WILL

i will forever

can you tell me the next
experience?
whats it all about?
is it serene, mama?
it is a conundrum?
uh oh
not another one
again
lets call it the
surfboard times
all right lets
head up & tackle the mightiest wave in the whole
wide world
i mean the biggest one we ever saw & jump on it like a

GIANT WOMAN
with wings of wonder

we'll fly on the wave of
superness
we'll be free from injustice
& soar up on through the horizon
dying in peace so peaceful we'll be convinced we're still
alive

just womblike

DUMB
CRASH
BANG
ZOOM

Come the fuck on here!
What are you?
Thinking are you?
Under a Spell?
And if so,
Can i have sum?

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
HollyHeroin Comment by: HollyHeroin - 2008-04-06 21:31
Add to Readers
      
This one is going in my library.
1

Sponsored Ads


Added to Library of:

By johnnycoolhand

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S